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Fire

only in a dream

Tender fingers that you run all across my body.
warmth and love that i can feel emulating from your soul.
Gentle words that caress my heart,
Why must this be only in a dream?
I open my eyes to find myself in a vast land of emptiness.
Gnarled brush tangling the entire ground is what creates my home
I long for the ability to close my eyes again.
feel your pressence drawing itself closer and more defined
Imagery plays tricks on me as i see patterns in the skies
that masquerade into my life as if they were your eyes.
pondering...
questioning...
I smile as the soft presence graces my freshly closed eyelids.
but as i open them i see a lightining storm striking the ground benieth me,
forever alternating my world surrounded now with fire,
the new essence that lights my life
a new being taking a living form before my mind.
I call out for a kiss, for it's warm gentle touch.
I reach out and feel it grasp me tightly within its entity
How I longed to be held.
Finally I am enveloped inside it's body,
my love has ignited my spirits.
A flame so grand it brings me to my knees.
Blackening my bones,
Bringing me to my ashen grave.
Finally I leave this land in billows of smoke.

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superfreak19
Dec. 28th, 2004 03:58 pm (UTC)
Whoa!!
Holy crap. I know you have no idea who I am but that was such an awesome poem!
wrecktangle
Dec. 28th, 2004 08:04 pm (UTC)
Re: Whoa!!
:D
narnar
Dec. 28th, 2004 05:03 pm (UTC)
Dude if you wrote that... GENIOUS!
wrecktangle
Dec. 28th, 2004 08:04 pm (UTC)
thank you :)
cold_wolf77
Oct. 28th, 2012 02:19 am (UTC)
You really have a way with words. The force of your words has aroused my soul to glow in a radiant display of colors. The flow of your poem enticed the fires of my soul engulf my imagination. Never has my heart ever been swayed in such a way by a single poem. Make cold blue flame flash fire with huge intensity :)
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