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Falling Out Of Love

I think i'm falling out of Love

Everytime "I Love You" escaped from your precious lips, I was entranced.

Entranced will I be no more

Your precious soul and body floating among the stars. I gave my everything to follow along on your adventure. Now I have no more and i am wandering poor.

Alone am I, now i can see. All the things you showed me, through the lens of beauty. Now the lens has shattered and I stand alone to gaze at the broken life ahead of me. It is my own, as I step upon the glass that lay before me. The lens of beauty that once existed, I am tattered within.. it shreds my souls

Gnarled now in a knot of confusion. I stand to watch you fly away in your reverance

You swept me off my feet, and let me fall from the sky. I hit the ground and shattered the lens of beauty, i now lie upon torn and tattered.

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(Anonymous)
Jun. 9th, 2004 07:00 pm (UTC)
I like it. "the shattered lens of beauty" i think its written well with a lot of good metaphors and symbolism. the only thing that bugs me is the writing, but im not partial to things that rhyme- cept dr. suess :-D
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